I tried to talk to you, but you didn't reply. I ask questions and all you did was lie. I made room for you, you left me in the dark, Didn't hold me tight, I had to find the light.
I tried to hold you, yet you pushed me away. You left without reasons, I wont forget that day. But I'm doing alright, you didn't think I could with all of me, I made it right, but it shows how much I know and how much I learn without you being a part of my life. The world keeps moving just like the hands of the clock keeps turning we can't change the past but yet we could change the future.
Marlene Mendoza
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awesome job hun, very strong, and must have been hard to write, keep it up :) hugss
ReplyDeleteTy I sure love it Ty
ReplyDeleteI can certainly relate to this poem Cupcake. I wrote a similar piece years ago called Childless Mother or maybe it was Motherless Child. I can't recall which title I finally settled on. After reading yours I'm tempted to go look it up just to check it out and refresh my mind. It seems no matter how old we get, past feelings are still able to haunt... but the process of writing them is very theraputic and you did a really great job! I want to thank you for sharing it with us.
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